work in progress: the sum41 song

you waited for your turn
your poor soul that was doomed right from the start
from ‘hi’, it was a work
she made a doormat of your once tranpled heart
and now you’re left
woth more questions, too scared to ask
future no more different than your past
thoughtless
promise

another lesson learned
you said you thought you knew and yet yoo failed again
don’t think that i’m concerned
instead be fortunate that you still have a friend
who gives a damn
unlike your previous mistake
took everything you ever made

the january challenge’s entry for the 21st. tried a similar cadence in the verses after listening to ‘over my head/better off dead’ from sum 41. i’m sure i have a chorus and a bridge somewhere so i can put this in the finished pile.

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